datadiffusion Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 Being brutal your CV could do with some work, simple stuff like spelling London with a lowercase 'l' is inexcusable in the age of the spellchecker. I'd also like to know a lot more (but not hugely more, about another sentence) about some of your positions. Also avoid terms like 'I consider myself' - I might consider myself the greatest installer in town but if I told you I *was* the best it might make you listen - could still be BS but it sounds more confident and more likely to be possible. Anyway that's just for starters, good luck! Quote So, I've decided to take my work back underground.... to stop it falling into the wrong hands
PeterJames Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 Hi Andy Ive sent you an email Being brutal your CV could do with some work, simple stuff like spelling London with a lowercase 'l' is inexcusable in the age of the spellchecker. I'd also like to know a lot more (but not hugely more, about another sentence) about some of your positions. Also avoid terms like 'I consider myself' - I might consider myself the greatest installer in town but if I told you I *was* the best it might make you listen - could still be BS but it sounds more confident and more likely to be possible. Anyway that's just for starters, good luck! To be fair he could say he saw a picture of an alarm panel once and some co's will take him on Stu. Quote
norman Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 You did... Quote Nothing is foolproof to a sufficiently talented fool.
goncall Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 Being brutal your CV could do with some work, simple stuff like spelling London with a lowercase 'l' is inexcusable in the age of the spellchecker. I'd also like to know a lot more (but not hugely more, about another sentence) about some of your positions. Also avoid terms like 'I consider myself' - I might consider myself the greatest installer in town but if I told you I *was* the best it might make you listen - could still be BS but it sounds more confident and more likely to be possible. Anyway that's just for starters, good luck! Tbf to the op its decent,granted hes not bigging himself up as the best installer in town but he may be,i know the cv writers like you to make out your the best in the land but i find that if you cant back that up in practice you will look a fool,hence why i may word mine different Quote
PeterJames Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 You did... I didnt ! I think I know who you are referring too and tbf to me he did appear to be fairly knowledgeable on here Quote
norman Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 Yes I am and tbf yes he did. Quote Nothing is foolproof to a sufficiently talented fool.
PeterJames Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 Spelling is definitely not Andy's strong point his email address on the CV bounced Quote
norman Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 lol Quote Nothing is foolproof to a sufficiently talented fool.
goncall Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 Spelling is definitely not Andy's strong point his email address on the CV bounced Not good,maybe a wind up Quote
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